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Is This Poem Written Well, And Is It Any Good?

The Cheatgrass and the Scythe There's an old farmer's tale called "The Cheatgrass and the Scythe," where we give gratitude to our pendulum hands Every spring, the cheatgrass creeps near like a thief...
03:02 Sun 07th Jun 201563 answers, last by bob68k 16:34 Sat 13th Jun 2015
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Does This Poem Make Sense So Far?

Its not finished yet. I just wanted to see what these two stanzas might convey to people. As always, thanks for the comments folks. Nearby the iron bark tree my fathers flesh drafted to ashes,...
01:32 Thu 14th Mar 201311 answers, last by elliemay1 00:37 Sun 17th Mar 2013

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