Help In English

[fatema]

Hi, everyone. Anyone can please proofread my email? Thanks in advance.


Dear Madam,

Please find attached the abstract of my presentation and I'm interested to present my presentation on 27th January and I will upload my PowerPoint on the online portal.
please let me know if I need to provide more information.

Regards,
abc

[jno]

you say "present/ation" too often. Maybe just "I'm interested to present it"

When you say "interested" do you mean you're ready to or just that you would like to?

[bednobs]

also, is it your tutor you are sending it to? If you know her name, madam seems a bit formal

[Prudie]

Not sure what you mean by the abstract? 'Please find my presentation attached' would do.

[Old_Geezer]

Capitalise the 2nd "please" too. Or better still, since you've already used that word earlier, consider, "I'm happy to provide any further information you may need".

[bobbinwales]

prudie- the abstracts probably a summary rather than the full presentation

[bookbinder]

Dear Madam,
I attach the abstract of my presentation. I should like to show my presentation on the 27th of January 2021, and I shall upload my PowerPoint on the online portal. Please let me know if you require any more information.
Regards,
abc