Need Help With A Poem!

[Meggyw]

I've gotta write a poem about creation of the world so either god making the world in 6 days or maybe to do with the Big Bang! Just on how the world was created!

[Peter Pedant]

what have you got so far ?

( nothing is not the right answer )

[AlwaysConfused]

Any ideas so far?

[-Talbot-]

I know just the man................The Bard of Barking will be along soon.

[jourdain2]

Echo the demand for any ideas - I've immediately got an idea involving Gaia, but it would be cheating to give you it. Tell us your starting point.

[janbee]

Maybe God did create the world in 6 days but Wimpeys could've done it in 4 and Barratts in 3.

[AlwaysConfused]

Toying with ideas here, how about a start such as:
The World

We take it for granted, we forget to ask why?
I'll begin to explain How and Who
Created our Earth, Sea and Sky.

[DTCwordfan]

It's said that God made Earth out of his strange dreams,
Of the highest mountains, deepest oceans and streams,
Rolling hills, moorland, river plains and wooded land,
Then he paused and thought,
"I need something to stand on top of the mountains
To discover the seas, explore the plains and
chop down the trees, someone to start small and grow,
Sturdy, strong like a tree." And so?
He created Men, full of spirit and fun,
To explore and conquer, to drink and run,
With dirty faces, banged up chins
With courageous hearts and boyish grins.
When He had completed the task He'd begun,
He surely said, "That's the job well done."
But then he made the counterbalance, Woman.
Chaos and Disorder, Earth full of sin
The ultimate, God to consign us to his bin.

[janbee]

DTC, well done. You have the gift lad !

[-Talbot-]

He certainly has, jan....................one of the best plagerisers around. Well done DT.

[DTCwordfan]

Who wrote that, talbot? and then you need a course in copyright and IP.....!

[-Talbot-]

Why God Made Little Boys

God made a world out of His dreams,
of magic mountains, oceans and streams,
Prairies and plains and wooded land.
Then paused and thought
I need someone to stand, on top of the mountains,
to conquer the seas, explore the plains
and climb the trees.
Someone to start out small and grow,
sturdy and strong like a tree and so
He created boys, full of spirit and fun
To explore and conquer, to romp and run
With dirty faces, and banged up chins
With courageous hearts and boyish grins.
And when He had completed the task He'd begun,
He surely said, "That's a job well done."


Here's one I made earlier

[DTCwordfan]

who wrote it?

[-Talbot-]

Me

[DTCwordfan]

Prove it.

[DTCwordfan]

It's officially classified as Anon and that's what I tend to play around with it. IP/Copyright wise that is permissible and, in fact, ownership can cross over. More importantly, as I don't give a proverbial here, it's incredibly important to define that IP/Copyright remains with you if you write software or you can inadvertently transfer the IP if someone makes just one improvement to it.

I just do this for some fun on here, such as with the Christmas announcements....so politely, I'm saying with a smile, 'Happy Christmas - and tuff."

[jno]

there are lots of theories/legends, not just God and Big Bang. Try doing a search for "creation myths" and see if anything stries a chord.

[Meggyw]

He didn't write it at all! I found it on google

[Peter Pedant]

yup the idea Megz is YOU write the poem ( and we help a bit )

[Prudie]

Why not just follow the bible version? I don't.t know it but you could do it like a little song

On the first day of ever God created the world,
On the second day of ever, he made the seas so blue

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