Need English Correction

[fatema]

Is it correct or?
Dear xyz,

following is the complete attendance status for the month of Sep. please in case of any question do contact

Thank you
xyz,

[waterboatman]

Capital F In Following.

Capital P in Please.

Yours Sincerely. Instead of Thank you.

[waterboatman]

Also Full stop . after contact.

comma after Please

[fiction-factory]

This query is pretty much the same as this earlier one from 3 weeks ago
http://www.theanswerbank.co.uk/Jobs-and-Education/Question1511251.html
If this is a piece of coursework then I would take on board the above suggestions. It would sound less stilted and more friendly though if you were to say something like

"Here is your complete attendance status (or record) for September 2016. If you have any queries please contact me."

Pedants may say my IF should be SHOULD but I'm sure it makes perfect sense as IF.

If the email is just one you want to send at work then it depends on the organisational style but most seem to use a chatty style now and are composed often under time constraints so I would just send it now and start another task .

Good luck.

[murraymints]

Dear xyz

Please find below the complete attendance status for the month of September.

Should you require any clarification of this information please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerley

[fiction-factory]

Yes, lots of options. In my experience the terms yours sincerely and yours faithfully are not used in office internal emails but maybe some organisations do use such a style. I used to spend ages crafting emails but in my experience now many are just banged out on the spot, maybe on a hand-held device while in a meeting or standing in a lift .