Media & TV1 min ago
Need Help In English Correction
what should i write him?
I have discussed your points regrading mobile application with my boss, my boss saying that he got your idea that what you want in your mobile application, he saying that if you are interested that may he send you proposal or if you still want to know anything i can give you his email and mobile number so there you can talk with him in details.
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However here's how I'd amend your text:
I have spoken to my boss (Fred Bloggs) about the development of a propoed mobile application, which you referred to in your email/letter/phone call.
He suggests that, if you wish to proceed further, you should submit a formal application to our company in order that we can then respond with an appropriate proposal.
In the meantime, if you wish to discuss the matter further, please feel free to contact Fred directly, either by email (email@example.com) or on his mobile number (01234 567 890).