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inamuddle1 | 19:13 Sun 24th Feb 2013 | Arts & Literature
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Neutron particals of lilac light person,
Scandalous energy,
Enchanted city,
engraved and critical kaleidoscope salvation
for a revolution of rhymes and medleys of discrimination.
Gravity,
proof
chamber of chaos
Orchestra orb
oracle origin.
A children's story and a day in the life.
A dream,
A forest,
a thousand nights.
Addictive acknowledgement with presence of mind,
a gift of natures navigators
Afternoon coffee bugs
Air locked ceremony of the sun.
Jade jewel of shimmering realm melodies
celebration,
sway,
crack open a bottle
de-javu,
Indian indigo summer.
The root of light,
sun, star, moon, initiate.
Fresh fruit distribution.
The future light of Neutron particals of lilac light,
The future calls the dawn.
Galaxy to Galaxy,
flying saucers sorcerer,
with a joystick for navigation,
bringing us back to decriminalisation.
Self modification with no complication,
Drop me of at NASA Station.
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No worries, here's some (post production). INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY A solid punch from sonny's fist slams into savvas' swollen and bloodied face. Save as is tied to a chair in his own home. Charlie sits at a desk in the corner searching a computer. Sonny lands another vicious blow. SONNY where? No response so sonny hits out again. SONNY (CONT'D) Tell me and it's...
19:59 Sun 24th Feb 2013
My head hurts now!!!
Why not relax by reading some poetry ratter? :)
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Mine too :( All my friends love my writing...
Now that is best answer........
dr b's that is.....
Now see! Iknew there was a reason why I didn't like poetry!
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I feel like i've just done an episode of X Factor and got booooo'd off the stage lol... Ah well. Peace n love
Your poem don't rhyme,
But neither does mine.
Oops yes it does,
I'm really a wuss.
Why anyone would want to list
en to poems like yours
unless they were slightly inebriated
is beyond me.

Way over my head. X
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Tonight I will dance through the forest of dreams,
like a fairy with twinkle toes,
and I can go anywhere just by twitching my noes.
I will sit on the mushrooms,
and feed the little pink bunnies,
because it's my dream,
the bunnies can be pink if i want them to be.
//I rub my toes and my legs go tight!//

are you sure the right person's rubbing the right bits??
Awww, now i quite like that one muddle!
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Im not complaining, I love it :D
Are they 'Magic Mushrooms' inamuddle ?.
I think tutors in Creative Writing classes should print the OP off and use as an example of pretentious drivel, but hey that's just my opinion.
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Whatever, your all entitled to your opinions and I suppose I did ask for them. I've had enough now.
Sorry, but no.
What drugs are you on?
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I dont take drugs.
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Im having wine right now and cigarettes
Aren't art folk tetchy?
Have you been nibbling these mushrooms?
Could explain why you're seeing pink bunnies

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