Hi Looking For A Kind Soul To Listen To My Gabriella Cilmi Cover

[lauratwentyeight]

http://youtu.be/UnbMWXuB00A any feed back GOOD OR BAD would be great! i know i had to start and stop a bit lol! Media URL: http://youtu.be/UnbMWXuB00A
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[Jemisa]

Hmm! S'ok, nothing more.

jem.

[lauratwentyeight]

oh dear lol! im not sure i should keep it now haha!

[Jemisa]

Thats only my opinion Laura,Try XFactor.

We don't normallyhave this sort of Q on AB.

jem

[anaxcrosswords]

Or if you'd like the opinion of a musician - excellent.

[Mojo-Jo-Jo]

You're voice is strong but a little pitchy in places.
I wouldn't be disappointed if I heard you.

[Mojo-Jo-Jo]

*your

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks anaxcrossword for your comment very nice of you! and mojo too! and jemisa i understand where your coming from im not interested in x factor tbh i just enjoy singing and sharing getting opinions thats all and i appreciate your thanks! :)

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks jordyboy for giving it a go lol! yeah think i should chuck the towel im no singer i know! ;)

[lauratwentyeight]

shirley b? are you referring to shirley bassey? i like some of that mega voice for a woman i also love tina turner they dig that voice from deep down!;)

[lauratwentyeight]

aww well ive not removed it yet but i will ive got it off public you tube so only ppl who i show it to can see it il show my mum then delete it thanks for the input folks! ;)

[andy-hughes]

I think you have pitched it a little high, and out of your comfortable vocal range, so manybe drop it a couple of keys.

Your accomapniement would be better if you strummed chords - you are not quite fluent enough to make your apreggios work in the effortless way that they need to, when you are singing in such an 'exposed' format.

Hope this helps.

[joggerjayne]

Hey, not seen you post for a while, Laura.

That's a good song for you. You have the right sort of voice. I enjoyed it.

I would just say ...

1. Maybe do it again when you have the whole song confidently in your head. Then you can look at the camera, and engage with people who watch you clip.

2. You look a bit hesitant. Be more confident. You have a really nice voice. Possibly nicer than you realise. Enjoy your voice. Be confident with it. It will give your whole performance a lift if you look like you're enjoying singing. It's not just about how you sing. It's about how you present your singing.

3. I'd say DON'T go on the X Factor. The X Factor is for talentless wannabes who will do anything to be famous, and who can be made to sound good if you give them vocal lessons, engineer their recording so you can't hear their real voice, and distract the audience from how rubbish they are with costumes and dance routines. If you can sing well, you don't belong on the X Factor.

[lauratwentyeight]

dear andy and jayne thanks so much for your input it really helped alot! i deleted the video for a most of the reasons you both state absolutely spot on thankyou! i wasent enjoying it its to high and the guitar just dont fit lol! im so greatful for ppl on here to help me thankyou!