im on a writing spree lol wrote this short song again!

[lauratwentyeight]

not sure i keep writing stuff and deleting it im worried its awful thats all lol!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgLo_3LhB_E

[tonyav]

Well I quite liked it, Laura.

[Mamyalynne]

Laura, I know you appreciate honesty - that suits your voice far better than some you have sung. I am sure you can pad it out to a full number , good luck.

[baza]

I agree with tony, there is something , quite liked it , lets have somemore.

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks for your honesty! i at the point where i want to write i just need to find a guitarist/songwriter to help lol! im currently looking! one minute is the limit it seems when im writing due to my limited guitar skills haha!

[tonyav]

Keep it up Laura, I'm sure you will improve with time.

[petal54]

make sure when you are famous,get a haircut tosuit your face

[lauratwentyeight]

petal54 ouch lol! im sorry my natural hair is curly wavy and thats how it looks lol! im not out to look good just to try and make music!

[lauratwentyeight]

This is the reason i dont go out ppl making comment like that! it hurts like hell! tell u what next time i wont film my face

[tonyav]

Hey Laura, take no notice, we are interested in your music.

[petal54]

no offence ment,didn't watch anyway!

[baza]

laura when you ARE famous please remember youre early fans tony and mamya and me,

[lauratwentyeight]

baza tony mamya thanks x

[erin-x]

That was really good! I always like what you post :-)

[MASS1961]

Sounds good Laura, make it full length it's got something, and you look good too, you're a pretty girl.

[lauratwentyeight]

i guess in this day and age looks are all part of the package! well not intrested i was in my housecoat after a long day of working and i felt like singing not doing my hair and make up im a real person not a fake that ios my bit and i have said it lol

[Mamyalynne]

Laura re the looks, we have been here before - please know, I do understand but never let that stand in the way of your wonderful creativity. ♥

[ELVIS68]

Laura, too many high notes in that one.

Still waiting for Sixpence None The Richer!

Do it!!!!!!

[Bluestone]

Petal54, what are you even on about?!
Laura - great music, and you look just fine. Naturally pretty.

[lauratwentyeight]

thankyou ladys x

[mrs.chappie]

Well it gets the thumbs up from me. Well done lass.