Can You Rate My Song?

Meowcatoofcat031 | 07:03 Sun 14th May 2023 | Music

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TW

SH, BLOOD, BULLYING, BAD THOUGHTS
Please do not take this down. I really need to know.

Sharp thoughts

Verse 1:
Sometimes I feel like I'm trapped in my mind
These Painful sharp Urges are stuck in my mind
I cut to make the sharp thoughts go away
Over and over again every day
But they always come back either way
And it’s tiring having to see myself this way
But stopping makes the thoughts grow stronger
Either way
And it hurts drawing blood every day
But now it’s the only way…

Chorus:
Sharp thoughts keep cutting my mind
So That means deeper thoughts
Give deeper Cuts right?
The Deeper mazes you have to get through
Sharper names the people call you
The Deeper cuts that your self gives you
Sharper ways that others hurt you
Sharp thoughts keep running through my mind
Over and over again it has to stop it’s about time
Six years and it’s still here
And yet I feel like there not going anywhere

Verse 2:
School is a nightmare, I hate what they say
“Useless nobody, eww get away”
I try to fit in, but I have my own category
The weirdos and freaks that bother everybody
I'm different, just like the others we act like kids
Being Innocent not fighting each other but the cool kids vape, fight and *** because acting like kids Isn’t enough
“hey how about we act like adults in middle school?”
Sometimes I try to agree, maybe acting like the others will be good for me?
But no it doesn’t work that way you have to be pretty to get your way if not your called
“Fat” “ugly” “skeleton” “pimple head” “giraffe neck” “Faggot” “***”
Guhh All those words give me an itch
I feel bad for the others they don’t deserve it
I bet there thought are sharp to

Chorus:
Sharp thoughts keep cutting my mind
That means deeper thoughts
Give deeper Cuts right?
The Deeper mazes you have to get through
The Sharper names the people call you
The Deeper cuts that your self gives you
The Sharper ways that others hurt you
Sharp thoughts keep running through my mind
Over and over again it has to stop it’s about time
Six years and it’s still here
And yet I feel like there not going anywhere

Bridge:
Some times I wish I was someone else
But this is who I am, and I can't change myself
My personality is what ruins me
Acting childish and annoying others
Gets the best of me, sometimes I don’t
even notice my mind gets so blurry it’s hard
To focus
But the others around me don’t seem to Care
Because it’s how I act or what I wear but they
Cant tell and they Don’t see that something is wrong with me…

Chorus:
Sharp thoughts keep cutting my mind
That means deeper thoughts
Give deeper Cuts right?
The Deeper mazes you have to get through
The Sharper names the people call you
The Deeper cuts that your self gives you
The Sharper ways that others hurt you
Sharp thoughts keep running through my mind
Over and over again it has to stop it’s about time
Six years and it’s still here
And yet I feel like there not going anywhere

(End)

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Ken4155

I'm assuming it's a rap song, but without any accompanying music, it's really just a poem, isn't it. A heartfelt one, no doubt, in which your message comes over loud and clear.
And, revealing to the world, one's innermost feelings, in song, never did Adele or Eminem any harm, did it?