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metaphorically rephrase please??

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5487 | 17:03 Mon 17th Nov 2008 | Arts & Literature
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'how cruel that our sun has setted when it had only began to rise.'

It isnt very fitting for what i wanted to apply it to.

PLEASE help??:)
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um... what do you want to apply it to?
How about, 'We had joy we had fun, we had Forest on the run, but the joy didn't last , cos the b&rstards ran too fast' ?
only the good die young...
Bad grammar is never fitting, anytime, anywhere.
surely the sun 'sets' not setted!...?
And I was thinking of "began" . That should be "begun".
I would have written " How cruel that our sun has set, when it had only just begun to rise"
5487 has obviously taken it from somewhere else, I was not implying that 5487's grammar was bad.
As Jno said, if we knew how you wished to apply it, we could perhaps be more help.

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