im working on writing this wee song and need advice please!

[lauratwentyeight]

i only have a wee bit of it at the moment but i dunno if its worth working on? advice really needed please lol! Media URL: http://youtu.be/lLAOCspc6QQ
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[lauratwentyeight]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLAOCspc6QQ

[erin-x]

Very good! I wish I could do what you do... I'm jealous :-)

[slinky.kate]

Sounds really good, your voice suits where you have the capo, was it the 3rd fret? I would try and expand on it and give it a chorus or a change of tempo or even some palm muting to change the vibe of the song. But definitely keep working on it. What were the chords out of interest?

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks guys! i wasent sure this was worth it lol! yeah capo is on the 4th frett ;)

[annadomino]

Don't sing down your nose.

[lauratwentyeight]

yeah i cant sing i know lol! but i try, not meaning to sing through my nose i was just throwing something together so i wasent sure what to do lol ;)

[tonyav]

You are a talented young lady, keep at it your doing fine.

[lauratwentyeight]

you are way to kind thanks ;)