Some Fun - Haiku

DTCwordfan | 18:58 Wed 21st Nov 2018 | ChatterBank

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Have just described a Haiku to my mother, a question of Pointless.....

3 lines, 5 syllables for lines 1 and 3 and 7 for the middle one, doesn't have to rhyme....

I've just written one for her....it even registered!

'The wine glass tasted
My mother drunk as a fart
Dinner yet to start.'

Let's see yours and a BA up for grabs

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Tilly2

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Thank you for BA I so much wanted to win The poetry prize. :-)

22:27 Wed 21st Nov 2018

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sandyRoe

Winter fuel prices cruel
Spending on oil makes blood boil
Wiser buying drink I think

Tilly2

The black winter sky
Is a stage, on which we watch
The full moon dancing.

Tilly2

(Are you expecting only amusing ones, DTC?)

sandyRoe

Good, that. ^^^

Patsy33

This is different
I like to try something new
Haiku, new to me!

DTCwordfan

Question Author

tilly, whatever, serious, news, family, cynical, comical, etc etc......very good, yours and Patsy's

Odes abound on here
Tilly and Patsy on cue
Haikus impressive

DTCwordfan

Question Author

and the theme-imagery of Sandy's, good - just a syllable out on line 1 and two on line 3.

Tilly2

My mind has gone blank
I have writer's block, something
Needs to be opened