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Is This Newspaper's Policy Correct?

https://www.southwalesargus.co.uk/news/18008148.torfaen-re-use-shop-opened-pontypool-teen-passion-recycling/ The young man is called 'Mr Bradfield'....
18:33 Mon 04th Nov 201911 answers, last by THECORBYLOON 22:05 Mon 04th Nov 2019
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Is The Use Of "mr." Correct In This Article?

https://www.southwalesargus.co.uk/news/16854150.13-year-old-taking-part-young-driver-challenge-2018/?ref=twtrec...
10:05 Sun 16th Sep 201857 answers, last by webbo3 18:48 Mon 17th Sep 2018
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Is This Scene Appropriate To Include In A Story?

Thank you to those who answered my last post. Do you think this scene is appropriate to include in the story? When they got to school Peter opened the door for Rachel and let her through. ‘Thank...
17:11 Thu 09th Apr 201516 answers, last by ladybirder 22:41 Sun 12th Apr 2015
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Is This A Good Beginning To A Short Story?

Peter Bumby had just turned thirteen. He was quite tall for his age and well-built. He had short blond hair and blue eyes. This morning he was wearing a clean white shirt tucked in and his navy school...
14:16 Sun 04th Jan 20156 answers, last by Quizmonkey 17:04 Tue 06th Jan 2015
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Should The Girl Call The Boy Mister?

Is he old enough? Shouldn't he be 'Master' and why is it only Sophia who addresses him as 'Mr'?
15:46 Sun 07th Dec 2014

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