Please Can You Help Me Write A Song??

[Meggyw]

I want it to be about a boybestfriend who I don't want to loose
He's gorgeous in every single way
He's so nice and always there
I've wrote a few songs myself and performed them to the school but now I need help...

[snags]

DTC's your man if you want 300+ verses...

[Old_Geezer]

I think if it is your song you'd be better presenting something other than a blank slate, for a critique.

[shoota]

Is this the boy know called Kyle,
Whose every move just makes you smile?
Don't try too hard,
My lonesome pard,
Or I'm afraid he'll run a mile.

[janbee]

DTC is the man to help you. He's the wizard of the rhyming word

[bibblebub]

I'm in love with a boy from Nantucket
We're going on holiday to Phuket

(i've run out of rhymes)

[AlwaysConfused]

How about
I have a boy best friend whom I don't want to lose,
He's gorgeous and lovely in every single way.
He's so nice and he's always there,
What more can a girl best friend say?

[mallyh]

just put an answer on your other post .

[saxy_jag]

Write your words first, set the melody around them and then add in your chords/harmony.