need advice as soon as possible on this singing plz!

[lauratwentyeight]

the reason i ask for advice fast is so i can delete it if ppl think its awful! be really greatful if someone could help me out! thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4unbHLEuxnA

[Purple_Popple]

Yup awful.

[MarkRae]

It's not your finest hour, though the guitar playing is even worse...

[Purple_Popple]

You have been endlessly asking 'for advice' for over 2 years now, why havent you done anything about it yet ? Yawn ! Not my type of singing/music, but these endless posts are same same same.

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks ouch lol